Thanks @jayna, I was reasonably pleased given the time constraints. If I had more time I would have liked to have delved a little deeper into the future reality where the story concluded. I just hope the extra paragraphs I added filled in some of the gaps in explaining the characters need to re-live other peoples crisis situations. Anyway, thanks for your help in the workshop, I have another Sci-Fi story in process at the moment which I shall be dropping in the fiction workshop soon ✍ 🙂
Thanks @jayna, I was reasonably pleased given the time constraints. If I had more time I would have liked to have delved a little deeper into the future reality where the story concluded. I just hope the extra paragraphs I added filled in some of the gaps in explaining the characters need to re-live other peoples crisis situations. Anyway, thanks for your help in the workshop, I have another Sci-Fi story in process at the moment which I shall be dropping in the fiction workshop soon ✍ 🙂