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RE: Paternal Peace: A Fifty Word Story
This is so rich with suggested complexity, @bex-dk. It took my breath away. You achieved the thing that all micro-fiction stories should aspire to: the encapsulation of a world, deeply imbued with complex relationships, that we immediately connect with on a visceral level, although we may not understand how or why.
Thanks! I do my best.