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RE: Okloro's Mouth [Short Story]
Wow, this is a unique story and storytelling style, @anikekirsten. I’ve never read anything quite like it. It was suspenseful. I was certain that Trines was dying, and Zoe too, since her lungs “gave up the element of life.” But they are healed and all is well. What an interesting reality you’ve created!
Thank you, Jayna!