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RE: Flash fiction - @son-of-satire's EMPATHY competition

in #fiction7 years ago

"Everyone in the room whispered among themselves as they stared at the bloody corpse on the floor, and the seemingly psychotic man responsible for it, sitting there sipping a beer."

What a way to end the story....
Everyone wonders what's happening while Nigel sips his beer, satisfied that he committed a great act of service, preventing another murder, paradoxically with a murder...

Great

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@son-of-satire provided the ending. Check out the other entries on his post, and see what you think of the others.

I did...
Also trying to provide a story too
But I like the way you recreated the ending

Dope

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