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RE: Night Demons Part 5 of 6

in #fiction7 years ago

Top notch! I think the Angel Michael will step back and let the hero battle this one out in the next ep.
If I may ask, I would like to see the gritty details of the street scenes sink in a bit. Make us feel and smell the action more! Slow down. Take your time. We don't need a fight scene in every installment (although I'm loving it!).

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Thanks!

This story is written to pulp principles...and Singapore really isn't all that interesting. For a fuller description of the Clarke Quay area you can look at the previous chapter; this one and the next are all about the action.

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