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RE: Finish the Fiction Story Contest - Week #15
Nicely done @cyemela, really strong opening paragraph. I like the comparison of the sun and wasps.
Madness in the shape of the face staring at him. Insanity in the sand salted wind drying his lips. The sun hovering like a wasp stinging his skin. He trudged forward a broken man.
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