Wow - I didn't see this in the workshop, so this is my first exposure. The conflicts here are intense! Very engaging, each paragraph just pulls you in deeper. This is really good stuff @jrhughes! Off to read part two 😃
Wow - I didn't see this in the workshop, so this is my first exposure. The conflicts here are intense! Very engaging, each paragraph just pulls you in deeper. This is really good stuff @jrhughes! Off to read part two 😃
Oh, thank you @geke! It's really nice to have fresh eyes on it. I did some expanding based on recommendations from the workshop and also lots of cutting of extraneous words lol. I'm happy you enjoyed it!