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RE: We Are Called Legion, for We Are Many
I'm getting this feedback a lot. I'm tying two stories together here. I might enact some structural changes to make it clearer what is going on. There's a kid playing hide and seek, and an old man back from the war, fighting against the trauma.
Wow, I had no clue at all. I was thinking he was counting down to periodic mortar attacks or something.