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RE: Apocalypse and Pretzels - Finish the Story #27
Very good digression on humans "swimming in an eternal ocean of demise". I enjoyed it a lot. You also smoothly entered in the story and continued it well interpreting the character of Duth. Ah, I was forgetting the way in which David reaches heavens... top (and very much in line with this story concept)!