Wow, great little story, @jrhughes.
I must admit, I never saw foresaw the ending so you really got me there. Showcases some unique talents from you that are packed full of imagination and creativity. A job very well done and hope to see a lot more of your work real soon.
Bravo!
Thanks so much for reading all the way through and for the thoughtful comments. I confess this one got away from me for awhile lol. I started with one story in mind and by the time I got to the end, I had written myself out of the beginning and had to choose whether I wanted to keep the story I started with, or rework the beginning to suit the end. I chose the latter and I'm glad, since it seems to have surprised more than I believe my original intention would have.
I'm going to try to post at least one fiction piece each week amid my regular blogging. If I do more I'll be writing the memoirs of a woman who lost her job because she spent all of her time on Steemit 😅
Thanks again. I'll give you a shout when I have something more if that's still cool 😎