Hey there lovely @dreemit!

Absolutely awesome! You are truly gifted in writing, I tell you. The descriptions you used to set the scene as well as describe their feelings while talking are spot on and very well thought out! You really know how to set the mood and keep a conversation involved and riveting.

Very well done indeed! I'm a big fan of yours already! :)

When I was reading, I picked up some pointers to improve on my work too! Thanks for that!