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RE: The Land Down the Well, Part 2
Just starting with the talking bread you had my attention. I love it when things can speak and how you build up the story, the thoughts of Liesl (what a funny name!:) going from the oven to the fruit tree.
Thanks a lot. That was well written, well thought and absolutely charming.
These small stylistic inserts with the crisp and clear messages made the story even more so... juicier!
I am so pleased.
Thank you. The form is called a haibun. More information on that can be found in the companion post. The link is in this one. ;-)