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RE: The Gods of Love and War - Part 1 (Short Fiction)
That was powerful, the kaleidescope of emotions came through very naturally. I definitely would not call it graphic though, just an honest account of feelings :)
Thank you for the feedback, much appreciated. Yes it felt very natural for me as I wrote it, but still vastly different to anything I had posted previously. I wanted it to be a real and powerful expression of the emotional battlefield that can often occur. But without turning in to some blamefest of victimhood :)