Original text:
Our house so big, you can't find your way to the kitchen. Woman where is me dumplin?

Dad's voice spoke in a frivolous and friendly voice with a heavy west indian accent.
Any hint of chauvinistic quality in dad’s words instantly evaporated as a result of the friendly and disarming broad smile that had come after it.

How I'd fix it:
"Our house so big, you can't find your way to the kitchen. Woman where is me dumplin?" Dad spoke in a frivolous and friendly voice with a heavy West Indian accent. Any hint of chauvinistic quality in his words instantly evaporated as a result of the friendly and disarming broad smile that came after it.