augment or Augment? Capitalization consistency issue here, it does look like you intended it to be Augment. The most glaring example:

We will wait! The augment spoke again. This time in a harder more resolute tone, and as a small swarm of tiny pentacopter drones rose from behind his back into an arch like formation around the Augment's head, John's mom realized why this figure had driven so much fear into her young son.

I'd write it as:
"We will wait!" the Augment spoke again. This time in a harder, more resolute tone, and as a small swarm of tiny pentacopter drones rose from behind his back into an arch-like formation around the Augment's head, John's mom realized why this figure had driven so much fear into her young son.