Quotation marks are missing throughout the chapter where conversation is involved. A couple of smaller examples with quotes placed where needed:

"The Bridgewater residence I presume?"

"Who are you sir, and why in the name of good decency couldn't you have called at the front door sir?" John's mom spoke as she tried to clean some of the dumpling dough from her hands.

"I am looking for John William Bridgewater", the augment spoke in a cold hard tone.

"Don't go and try to be a hero, kid", the cold voice of the Augment spoke. "I have two hundred of these drones deployed in the room your cute little sisters are playing in. Think about that before you try anything else."