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RE: Fiction Excerpt: Dragonflight
You must be a perfectionist :) I actually enjoyed reading this part of your story and would like to see more. I don't know about the rest so I can't judge if it's as good as this one but I think it is :)
That was a ride! I would also love to ride a dragon. I thought this only happened in Harry Potter but I see that it's in your story too! How cool!
Where did the dragon disappear? And why did he take him on a ride? You should share the rest so that the questions can be answered :)
Thank you for sharing!
I am a perfectionist. I don't like to publish a story unless it's right. This excerpt, I believe, is right on. The rest of the story still needs honing.
I understand. It's your 'baby' so it's important that it feels right to you and that you deliver to your readers what you believe is perfect :)
It has nothing to do with being my baby. It has to do with being a good story. All the elements have to line up. I judge my own stories the same way I'd judge someone else's if they were to send to me to be published in a book or magazine. If I wouldn't publish it, it shouldn't be published.