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Than you for reading!

Not at all. I am just very absent-minded. Originally when I read the prompt I didn't notice that the character name was actually given. Then, after you pointed it out to me I corrected it.

This time around though I made this revision and changed the name again in order to show @Zeldacroft that I am not going to use anything out of her prompt if I publish the story on any other sites.

Should I point out that he's Robert until paragraphs 7 & 8 where he becomes Jake, or should I just shut up and cease being so pedantic?

See I missed it again. That's just horrible. I am such an airhead.

Thank you. I fixed it.

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