Not at all. I am just very absent-minded. Originally when I read the prompt I didn't notice that the character name was actually given. Then, after you pointed it out to me I corrected it.
This time around though I made this revision and changed the name again in order to show @Zeldacroft that I am not going to use anything out of her prompt if I publish the story on any other sites.
Than you for reading!
Not at all. I am just very absent-minded. Originally when I read the prompt I didn't notice that the character name was actually given. Then, after you pointed it out to me I corrected it.
This time around though I made this revision and changed the name again in order to show @Zeldacroft that I am not going to use anything out of her prompt if I publish the story on any other sites.
Should I point out that he's Robert until paragraphs 7 & 8 where he becomes Jake, or should I just shut up and cease being so pedantic?
See I missed it again. That's just horrible. I am such an airhead.
Thank you. I fixed it.