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RE: Going below: A fifty-word short story
When it comes to heights, I'm with you, Jayna. There's not much I would relish more than being able to simply float up above any and every setting and see it from an aerial viewpoint.
However, I also love delving down into the depths of things... spelunking is a rarely experienced, but in my adventurous imagination, huge delight.
Your story captures the moment perfectly. Even without the background you shared, I immediately sensed what was happening.
Nicely done!