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RE: The Necromancers of Santa Muerte (Part I)

in #fiction7 years ago

The story's got a great set up. The ending does feel a bit abrupt, though. An extra line or two to inject tension an prepare the reader for the next part would do better. Something like a character remarking that the zombies are getting closer and they'd better be prepared or something like that.

Looking forward to the rest of the story.

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