Why on earth would you decide to write about a shoe? I'm baffled as to how you got there, but so glad you did. Your story allowed me to pass the time most admirably.
I also don't understand how you, or anyone else for that matter, can let someone else advise you on your writing. My story. Nobody else's story, my story.
Trust me, I'm a doctor.
lol. Well - this was for a contest where we were supposed to write about stuff from the perspective of something not human.... So I went with shoes. Dunno why. Just seemed like the sort of thing to do at the moment :-) Thanks bunches for reading this bit of weird anyway @catweasel. :-)