Your prose is engaging, flowing, and riveting. No surprise you've published your first hundred freewrites in a book! (Amazon ate my review, and I haven't checked to see if copied that one over to goodreads.) Oh wait! I should have a copy of it here at Steemit!! phew
You're great at striking a balance between Deep POV and exposition. I err on the side of not enough exposition, too much "in the head" stuff. You're a natural! And you also do the work of editing, revising, and polishing, I'm sure. Well done.
Hey :) Thank you very much! These are very nice words. I'm glad you liked it!
Don't think of it as err-ing, it's a negative word. Besides, I don't know if there is such a thing as a perfect recipe where it says how much of what there should be in a story, you know? Just write :)