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RE: Airborne - Contest Entry for Jon Knight's Armistice
Beautifully written, as we've come to expect from you!
Grandpas, as rare and mythical beings, a consequence of war-
How sad!
You write with authenticity - you know this village, these people. We nod in recognition. We get warm fuzzies at Grandpa's explanation for those two bumps (aka, shoulder blades?) - and some readers will take Gpa literally (magic!) and others will understand the kind, gentle way an old man reassures an anxious little girl.
Beautiful story. Haunting. I love it!
Thank you so much for your help with this and for digging my work! Thrilled that you do.