This is amazing! The descriptions of the slow coming to life, the struggling to move, the gradual comprehension, are just brilliant. The entire thing is just so amusing! How you didn't put this in for Comedy Open Mic!

The descriptions of life from an external point of view are so enjoyable, this was just incredibly fun to read. His reaction to the gnome party really made me smile, the unexpected nudity and effect it has on him. The conversation is brilliant, and they character "names" he uses for the other gnomes, really give the sense of his trying to understand the world he has found himself in. I will never look at gnomes the same again! But what are they are body suit for... the fun of not knowing just adds to it. The portal, the way it works, such a unique idea, as if gnomes wasn't imaginative enough! I really enjoyed this one - thank you so much!