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RE: FLASH FICTION: Dear Jimmy

in #fiction6 years ago

Very creative! While I was reading it I was thinking of this being the kids subconscious since there why in the 2nd grade. I like the style! Upvote and subbed!

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@byrondallen , I like your visualization...the kid doesn't necessarily need to be precocious (able to actually articulate in language his thought/feelings/ideas)...this could have been a subconscious stream of thought piece where the language used was merely interpretive of his feelings not necessarily something written out. Thanks for your comment!

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