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RE: Sci-fi Novel: The Ultimate Debate - Part 2: Sun Moi's Test With Ogox
This part was as intersting as the previous, thanks.
I would want to point out some grammatical errors:-
- It's been six months and he couldn't ->make<- any significant progress.
- reutine->routine
3.Saiki Wakanabe->Saiki Watanabe
4.now part of the family now->now part of the family.
I edited them 😎
https://steemit.com/blog/@lijo/my-extra-martial-affair-am-i-wrong
I wish I had steemians correctly my grammar like that!! ;) sweet
I like this part, if possible please post other parts soon, i am wattling rest of part. I like it.