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RE: Finish The Story Contest: Little Jazz and Lot of Hair in New Orleans

in #fiction6 years ago

Fantastic ending! Who cares if you went over the word limit with a story this good! The conversations were a trip to read and
you've written my favorite Tio Billy (Machete censuring him on his use of "tranny" was a nice touch)! tip!

https://coub.com/view/tzrc9

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its a running gimmick. the last story i had him say this

“The faggot back in Milan said three thousand euros,” Billy said.

“Fuck, Tío,” Mendoza said with a cringe. “You can’t use that word anymore.”

“Yes I can,” Billy said. “I sucked his dick. He’s a faggot.”

Clever Girl....

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