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RE: "The Bulwark's Shadow" - A Novel in Progress via Steemit (Part I, Chapter 2)
Loved the tone, it had a sort of Blade Runner feel to it. The only part I felt may have needed some clarification was whether the mom was murdered as well, I concluded she was, but had to read it twice. Other than that, very engaging and well written.
much appreciated! hadn't thought about the Bladerunner feel, but that's a nice thought! and yeah, this was early on in my writing days, and with it being the first novel, i imagine a lot of things in the narrative fell through the cracks, which is part of the reason i'm posting it up here. hopefully others can help point those out. thanks for the heads up on the mother aspect!