In fairness, moving an alcoholic into the bar is never going to be a good call. Even non alcoholics are going to drink more when it's to hand. Besides that it's a good story well written. True to life.
Yeah, definitely an absurd notion to knowingly move someone to the bar as a response to their drinking problem... Can't argue with you there lol. Anyway, thanks for reading!
Hi @birddroppings, congratulation on your curie vote again after your part one of KATHARSIS.
Your story never failed to attract my attention to read it in one shoot. I would always easy distracted if the story was too long, but not yours. Your story flow nicely and made me want to read it on and on.
Just a little suggestion, maybe in your next chapter. You can put in the link of your previous story chapters. This would be easier for new reader to search previous chapter of your story :)
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The manager didn't know Buddy had drinking problems? Hmmm, sad it ended badly for Buddy though, wonder what he is up to now...
Maybe Buddy just needs the right kind of friends, or he hasn't realized he needs help yet. I believe the tennis guy (whats his name again?) Can help him, maybe?
I haven't read the previous parts but this can somehow stand on its own, I will love to read the others though.
I believe we see on and off such personality as Buddy in our life, the easiest is just ignore them, sometimes you think they also want to be invisible. The way of your writing is so easy to read and it makes you keep reading because you are interested in what is going to happen. The description of such a guy like Buddy, caught my attention probably many of us sometimes think why they are so and if there is anything we can help with. You made it really intriguing ending with the fact that Buddy had an idea of doing somewhere, especially having that accident in the morning, I was wondering if he was planning to go to hospital, but probably not as he seems never was interested in his health. Thank you for the story :)
Thank you for reading. I like your observation that Buddy may want to be invisible. In my mind it's not only that the roommates are avoiding him, but that he (for the most part) doesn't want to be seen
It's amazing how you keep writing and writing. I wonder how many parts will this series have :) Buddy doesn't seem to be a guy, one would generally like to hang with, but such people are troubled and deserve a chance before judging them (just my opinion). I'm excited to see how this story will develop and I've noticed that you posted part 14 already, so I'm going to have a look now. Can't wait to see where Buddy will take 'you' :) Are you in process of making a book? Thank you for sharing!
I'm hoping to print it, but if I can't find a publisher (which is highly likely) then I'll probably self publish it on Amazon with an e-book version and a print version
In fairness, moving an alcoholic into the bar is never going to be a good call. Even non alcoholics are going to drink more when it's to hand. Besides that it's a good story well written. True to life.
Yeah, definitely an absurd notion to knowingly move someone to the bar as a response to their drinking problem... Can't argue with you there lol. Anyway, thanks for reading!
Hi @birddroppings, congratulation on your curie vote again after your part one of KATHARSIS.
Your story never failed to attract my attention to read it in one shoot. I would always easy distracted if the story was too long, but not yours. Your story flow nicely and made me want to read it on and on.
Just a little suggestion, maybe in your next chapter. You can put in the link of your previous story chapters. This would be easier for new reader to search previous chapter of your story :)
Thank you for reading and for your kind words! And good thinking on the chapter links
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The manager didn't know Buddy had drinking problems? Hmmm, sad it ended badly for Buddy though, wonder what he is up to now...
Maybe Buddy just needs the right kind of friends, or he hasn't realized he needs help yet. I believe the tennis guy (whats his name again?) Can help him, maybe?
I haven't read the previous parts but this can somehow stand on its own, I will love to read the others though.
I don't want to say too much because the answers are coming soon! Thank you for reading though, and I hope you'll stick with it to find out!
You wanna keep me in suspense? Hahahahh! Well, I hope it comes pretty soon!
I believe we see on and off such personality as Buddy in our life, the easiest is just ignore them, sometimes you think they also want to be invisible. The way of your writing is so easy to read and it makes you keep reading because you are interested in what is going to happen. The description of such a guy like Buddy, caught my attention probably many of us sometimes think why they are so and if there is anything we can help with. You made it really intriguing ending with the fact that Buddy had an idea of doing somewhere, especially having that accident in the morning, I was wondering if he was planning to go to hospital, but probably not as he seems never was interested in his health. Thank you for the story :)
Thank you for reading. I like your observation that Buddy may want to be invisible. In my mind it's not only that the roommates are avoiding him, but that he (for the most part) doesn't want to be seen
It's amazing how you keep writing and writing. I wonder how many parts will this series have :) Buddy doesn't seem to be a guy, one would generally like to hang with, but such people are troubled and deserve a chance before judging them (just my opinion). I'm excited to see how this story will develop and I've noticed that you posted part 14 already, so I'm going to have a look now. Can't wait to see where Buddy will take 'you' :) Are you in process of making a book? Thank you for sharing!
Thank you for reading! And yeah I'm thinking its going to be book length but relatively short by book standards, maybe 120 pages or so
If you publish it as an ebook then it's going to be more than enough, I believe :) Or are you planning to print it?
I'm hoping to print it, but if I can't find a publisher (which is highly likely) then I'll probably self publish it on Amazon with an e-book version and a print version
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