I'm going to have to go back and read the first six that came before this but I can tell you are a fantastic storyteller as this was interesting to read, even though it wasn't the action scene by any means. I also like how you make it easy for the reader to step back to the first chapter or step forward to the next! I'd recommend putting the next button at the bottom though.

Well done @markrmorrisjr! Upvoted :)