Having just discovered this story of yours, I went back to the first and worked my way to this post. As many have said, you are a good writer and obviously enjoy immersing yourself within the personalities of your characters.
I upvoted you and felt guilty when I saw what a tiny difference it made, but having just joined Steemit, I can't do anything about it.
I cannot come on line every day, but when I do, I'll make certain to return for sharing from you the latest episodes of Hailey.