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RE: Her Heart's Desire [Short Story]
Hi, this is a nice story though I was confused after the long line where you head-hopped...
Hi, this is a nice story though I was confused after the long line where you head-hopped...
Haha, my boyfriend wanted the witch to come back so I tacked that scene on (then I kept it even though he didn't like it). The idea is that the witch turns "heart's desires" into birds, thus freeing the customer from the desire. Thanks for reading!
Oh. My desire is to become a whale. I’m % 0.001 of the way there :-)
Just keep swimming! :)