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RE: The Day My City Stood-Still: Chapter 6 (Original)

in #fiction7 years ago

Hi @vinyprop , Though everybody in the story has done justice to their role but I really liked character of Bruce "The Butler" . His staunch towards his master to whom he's been serving for the about 40yrs now . How bucolic and unflappable he has emerged out as a person, doesn't utter even a single word even after the mental agony of the rich spoiled brat "Jonny". The words used here are so stirring & heartbreaking; I could actually envisage each and every person as is, I would say this was really poignant. You have done complete justice to your blurb.

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Thank you @amritasingh for your review on my post.. Trust me, it's supporters like yourself, who keep me pushing to continue. After all that an artist needs is some appreciation. You have given me happiness galore. Peace ✌️✌️

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