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RE: What Lurks Between - A SciFi/Horror Novella - Part Twenty-Three
Very attractive story. every paragraph have a lot of action that generate different feelings, you are professional in drive the excellent events.
my best one is I slowed, then stopped, and turned to face the monster.
“Barry, what are you doing? Run!”
makes me wonder why he do that and interesting to what is come after?
Great Work.