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RE: A Conspiracy Against Life - A twenty four hour short story
Quite a different approach from your previous stories but nonetheless entertaining. I did find the story's perspective interesting. Not the usual mainstream twist or approach. If I had anything to dislike about the short story, it would probably the part where it is a short story.
A lot of things could be expounded like how the setup and the Emperor knew. But I understood that those parts are both limits and strengths of the story, I think? The Emperor being feared for seemingly omnipotent and all.
I wrote this in less than an hour, trying to make the deadline (I didn't). I would have also added a hell of a lot more to it.
Thanks for reading!