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RE: La Petite Fille De La Mer - A Short Story

in #fiction7 years ago

It is incredible the change of emotions these lines bring to the reader. It is impossible not to picture the sequence of events after such a detailed description @ruth-girl. I am so pleased with the ending you chose for this piece :)

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Thank you so much for your lovely words @abigail-dantes! I am really glad I managed to pass these emotions on my words :D