Hey, @jackofcrows.

You know, I'm going to agree with you on this one. And it might actually be true for most of my five minute freewrites.

This one kind of ended without that big of a twist, though, and I do have a few people who always seem to want to know the rest of the story and so I figured I let those who just wanted the five minutes an opportunity to read that and those who wanted to know how things turned out could. And I even weaved in a minor moral to the story, too, so I'm good. :)