hahahahaha you are such a fast reader!!!!!! LOL
I'm so glad you liked it!!!! I was thinking that since this one doesn't have much conversation in it - it might be a little bit hard to read!
but - wow!!!! i'm so glad that you think it's the best chapter yet!!!! hehehehehe
That is an unexpected surprise!!!! :)
Well I told you before he hunts similar to the way I do. Stalker. True predator. Like in this paragraph:
He had been stalking her for three weeks now. Careful to keep his distance, he observed her from afar. He knew her patterns, her habits, and her schedule. Her waxy pallor revealed that she was slowly starving herself for energy. Good. Nothing like a little oasis to tempt a desert wanderer.
come back and watch the comments in a day or two - when my sweet subscribers have had a chance to all read and comment!
EVERYONE feels so differently towards the characters!!!!
like @monchhichi23 HATES this guy! hahahaha and @zen-art couldn't STAND Bryd and then... felt so bad when she saw what was happening! and then HATED this guy! hahahahaha (i'm not saying his name yet - so that they can read the story after seeing the comments hahahaha)
but - yes... i wanted to make this character very complex. and.... i think it's working so far :)
I'm SO loving your investment in this story!!! I totally feed off of all my reader's energy! hehehehehehe
Well it's a damn good character, love him or hate him. My favorite in the story. I mean, what if Bryd and Talia are really the evil ones? Or maybe that's just the way this 'creature' is. His nature. Can't hate him for that. It's like hating a caterpillar that eats your roses so it can turn into a butterfly.
That's exactly right. You can't usually tell at first glance what is what. And we are dealing with other dimensions here! Who is to say exactly what he's feeling? We can only view him through our human eyes and make judgments from our limited perspective. but when you can suspend your imagination enough to immerse yourself completely into the story..... that's when the fun begins! hehehehe
I love that you love it! (have i said that enough? i don't think i tire of saying it to my readers.... i really don't hahahahahaha)
hahahahaha you are such a fast reader!!!!!! LOL
I'm so glad you liked it!!!! I was thinking that since this one doesn't have much conversation in it - it might be a little bit hard to read!
but - wow!!!! i'm so glad that you think it's the best chapter yet!!!! hehehehehe
That is an unexpected surprise!!!! :)
Well I told you before he hunts similar to the way I do. Stalker. True predator. Like in this paragraph:
He's a badass.
hahahahahahahaha you know what i love?????
come back and watch the comments in a day or two - when my sweet subscribers have had a chance to all read and comment!
EVERYONE feels so differently towards the characters!!!!
like @monchhichi23 HATES this guy! hahahaha and @zen-art couldn't STAND Bryd and then... felt so bad when she saw what was happening! and then HATED this guy! hahahahaha (i'm not saying his name yet - so that they can read the story after seeing the comments hahahaha)
but - yes... i wanted to make this character very complex. and.... i think it's working so far :)
I'm SO loving your investment in this story!!! I totally feed off of all my reader's energy! hehehehehehe
Well it's a damn good character, love him or hate him. My favorite in the story. I mean, what if Bryd and Talia are really the evil ones? Or maybe that's just the way this 'creature' is. His nature. Can't hate him for that. It's like hating a caterpillar that eats your roses so it can turn into a butterfly.
That's exactly right. You can't usually tell at first glance what is what. And we are dealing with other dimensions here! Who is to say exactly what he's feeling? We can only view him through our human eyes and make judgments from our limited perspective. but when you can suspend your imagination enough to immerse yourself completely into the story..... that's when the fun begins! hehehehe
I love that you love it! (have i said that enough? i don't think i tire of saying it to my readers.... i really don't hahahahahaha)
Lol no worries sweets, looking forward to the next one for sure😎🤗
like i just told @tamala.... I'm thinking about having some fun with my readers very soon... keep your eyes peeled :)