This is a fantastic chapter! The force of the three destroying the evil that once was Derek. I can't wait to see how you wrap this up!
This is a fantastic chapter! The force of the three destroying the evil that once was Derek. I can't wait to see how you wrap this up!
Just 2 more days til chapter 32... and then the epilogue!
thank you for being such a faithful follower :)
I hope you are going to publish this?
Considering it.... I have other books that are published. but... something else is coming first :)
You are teasing again!
Certain publishers will not publish if you have already posted the story on line. Still, it is not long enough to be a full novel, so maybe it would do nicely as one of a list of short stories by @dreemsteem
I hope you all realise 'she' is actually the father of a son and 'she' gave you a hint of what is planned, but 'he' is embarrassed as a male to have written a story with such a strong female.
In real life Derek is 'her' attorney and he is going to sue everyone who does not call for his being saved at the last minute. That was the reason for asking us to take sides. (I guess you were able to guess he is an attorney since his character so perfectly suits the description of an attorney.
My own comment will come sometimes soon, in the next post or two....
:)
i'm laughing so hard.... you are so silly @arthur.grafo
if i published, I would self-publish ;) so it wouldn't be problem hehehehe
but - since it's available online... not sure how many people would purchase it. although - i could add some thing to it ;)
i'm looking forward to YOUR comment hehehehe