Another of my niggardly corrections
No amount would be to great
Needs to read
No amount would be too great
:)
As for real comments I should be posting, every good story needs a baddy. I needed to get a feel for the rationale, why and how. Starting to get a feel for him and it is looking promising.
gah!!!! where were you 5 days ago when I could have edited that before it was permanent??? LOLOLOL
thank you heheheh