Jarak

in #esteem4 years ago

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Bier jarak ari mata, kaoo dekat wan ni mata male nume sabe terbayang gambar mu ku pepanang ken penimes nume. Bier jarak i ranto dagang entii ate mu bimang kenn tajuk sara angke.

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Sedih ken denem mukalee, ujung sere ku pepanang tulissko gereall wan kelpah jedem, urum ranting ni uyem ken peganti ni penaa

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Lao senye remo tauhhi uren, wan jamur penyangkulen kite mu nilang rara. Besilloo nge jarak ari mata. Ku tau gere sawah talu, kusisu denem mukale olok repuk nenong ate ku. Mu tumpu ku wan ni ate, ku die kase ahire puren.

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kalau boleh masukan, bagusnya bahasa Indonesia saja. Kalau bahasa Daerah banyak yang tidak paham, padahal tulisannya sudah bagus.
@jamalgayoni ike nguk, kusaranen Berbahasa Indonesia di. Ike bahasa daerah dele sigere paham, padahal tulisene ngejeroh. Ike nulis puisi tolong "tag" nya isesuaikan.

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