Poetry: The Death
The Death
(Long way home)
By the moon went away
The wind blow softly
I.saw my soul
Floating in the darkness
I call...
Again n again
But, just echoing the empty
Where the place without light, i found myself laying down
Waiting for the end
It comes to the way, i surrender to the light...
I feel numb...
I walk on the floating cloud
Where there is no path
The thing I am looking for
Where it may be found?
The way back home
To the place I was born
The pain is no longer there
My soul is floating away
To the place of light
I saw a chance to follow
To the place where I was born
PTLB, 25092018
By: @el-nailul
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Sedih kali kok... berat rindu sepertinya, ada kabar duka kah?
Kilas balik kehidupan, berusaha menjadi lebih baik, ada kabar duka...tapi tidak seberapa kak @cicisaja
Kebanjiran kah?
A bit rough but I liked it!
Thank @fromage, yes, it is a bit difficult for me to write a poem in English, because I need to know more about the culture of the language.
hope God bring you to the better life..you must awake up and reorganize your life..my praying will be with you my brother ....
thank you very much my sista @yati, for all your support both online and offline
Very nice :) memento mori
hi thank you very much @jacinta.sevilla
I love the moon in poetry. <3
Thank you my friend @uniwhisp
If yourbEnglish improved you can give this one an edit, blow a bit new life into it and save the link underneath your new post.
The first sentence feels strange so do 2 or 3 other lines.
I wonder how you felt as you wrote this.