UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments! ALSO CARROT CAKE, HECK YEAH! Anyways, we’ll deal with the Saddie q later when Steem becomes more valuable in money-value. And yer welcome for the Lil’ Bris dedication.

Yeah, dialouge is tricky especially with a 50-word limit. But considering how much I just use dialogue to circumvent the “show-tell” rule, it comes as second-nature by how disinterested I am to specifically to worry over my choice.

But when I don’t utilize dialouge, I go all cartoony(-realistic) on everything! Cartoon-realism is oddly a great medium to drop some doses of underlying Surrealism in the description of things. Also, I love to direct the focus in stories; revealing when appropriate or making the background visibly respond to when a character takes an action. Anyways, that manager would not survive as the Colonel (a she mind yah) could’ve pulled out her makarov (her personal pistol) faster, be more of a steady shot and know where to shoot without hurting anybody. Anywho, I’ll leave the intent of the manager in the dark (Shambler soup anyone?). Also the Doctor (as hinted by the Colonel) is familiar with these attitudes, but yeah the Doc has her reasons to listen in. (Could always help later...) But yeah, the Government tends to Lie (censor and make propaganda to cover up the censoring) about things and she has her reasons in these times of crisis.

That’s right, making Bris was the best part of the post. Also, it’s implied that’s she connected to the Immortal; both by the Colonel-Doctor talk and the nobody questioning why a child is with an Immortal. But to be direct, she’s blood-kin to the Immortal by four-five generations. Yeah, that was a fun scene to make, her time in the military didn’t faze her mind on how to be a human and to have fun. Also the headscarf, hmm... traditional polish one for the Haitian-pole Immortal.

Hue hue hue, as yah shall say. As yah shall say. I’ll see yah when I see yah on those posts @brisby.