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RE: Horror Vacui - Spoken Word Poetry
Hey @cessarespinozaa, thank you so much, good sir.
In order to pursue better improving my art, what would be the "several details that can be improved Step by step" you referenced so that I can present better pieces in the future?
Thank you so much for the direction!
good work @carmalain7. Improve the organization a bit, and add some images referring to the text
I'm not sure I understand, improve the organization of poetry? It can't really be organized differently than the format of the poem. Also, poetry as an art form has rarely used more than one image if that historically, classically and contemporarily across even the most famous of works.
Hmm, maybe the nature of my text makes the more difficult to approach, I'll definitely put some thought to it, thank you for the words of feedback, good sir.