The over all track was well composed, with time both the sounds as well as the attitude got rhythm. Within a year that much progress seems extraordinary.
Almost all the notes were hit properly. A man with no musical background can't hit as precisely as you did.
Not offending to your passion, You posts on technology are more precisely made and easy to understand than this musical track.
Hope will see your next number with your vocal nodes too.

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