I'm so glad I stumbled across your post. There's a kind of desparate-to-not-care passion because you do care expression in your vocals. I found the accompaniment a little subdued for the tone of the lyrics, but none the less an obvious display of your skill and talent.
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Thanks very much for your compliments and curation. I've had ideas of developing a heavier metal version to express more the fire that goes with this song. I'll keep you posted.
I think a metal version would suit the vocals well.