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RE: An oaken serenity (original poetry)

in #dsound7 years ago (edited)

A word of inspiration for @d-pend


It's a candle in a frosty white night throbbing,

storm that incites, that is reborn and threatens,

that lights up as an instant and in a wandering heart,

he transforms and embraces the warmth of his existence.

It is the voice that travels and comes without knowing its dream,

invisible, which is the figure of your logo, praise,

that disguises as pleasure, disdain,

that draws the wind of indelible trace, his longing.

It incites exalted feelings on the strings,

and in the verse it is his feeling of indelible horizon,

it fills when throbbing hearts desolate,

and turns the dark into ethereal, the finite into unfathomable.

It makes transcendent the insensible and what a cocoon,

implosion turning illusion into a dream,

who sings and writes and flies and is lullabies,

It's the one I dare to call inspiration.

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Thank you @joelgonz1982 I love your lines. You have an excellent poetic sense. Please consider joining my 100 day poetry challenge which will be announced tomorrow in a post. I think you would do quite well! We will be writing in both English and mother tongues and finding applicable images to fit the lines. Later we will learn how to improve formatting in markdown and other things. There will be daily, weekly, and overall rewards for best creations.

@d-pend It seems good to me ..

I will be pending tomorrow of your publication to see the rule and condition and the tag that will be used .. and thanks for telling me that I have that poetic gift I just imagine something and try to combine the verse and the rest it comes out alone

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