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RE: The Dance of Destiny and Fate (My Original Poetry) - Written and Audio Versions
Something so melodic about this. Hopeful, yet haunting. The way you spaced the lines really elevated this, and I think the pacing you did was top-notch. I like how it unfolded, from short breaths to longer ones. Masterful stuff here, mate!
By the way, have you asked anyone else about the volume? Still low for me. I would be happy to help you in postprocessing it if you want.
Thanks for your feedback on the poem, very happy to hear your thoughts on it. The pacing was an issue I worked on, trying to get out of a pure rhyming word play and into telling more of a story in poem form. The flow and melody of it was important to get right.
As for the volume, there is one more control on the audio software I can try. I have the recording volume quite high but that hasn't seemed to affect it. I remember the very first attempt where i could hear my breathing too much and it was off putting. Because pf my lung issue I do breath deeply and sound out of breath a lot, so I needed to try to take that into account. So I got the recording level to a point where it didn't pick that up so much, but the end result is a low overall volume, which annoys me somewhat.
I have one more recorded poem to share, but before recording any new ones I will play around with settings some more. Tell me, do you know about Hz levels? Because that is the main setting I still have to look at. Pretty sure I did adjust that initially and that gave me problems, but not sure. It is set at 44100, but can go so much higher. I will Google that one next to learn more.
I know a little about audio, and I think it's just enough for a simple production. I have a script to remove ambient noise, and I think it can be used to remove excess breathing.