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RE: Poem - Wave Shaped Walls - Dsound Reading - Freewrite, Prompt - Big wave
I love the consistency in your lines and how you kept the wants flowing. I particularly loved this three lines.
into the future,
sweating an ocean
of angry emotion,
Really glad you digged the poem abmakko. Any sea related poem just flies out of me and usually flows naturally as it's the place I like the most. Born in the wrong body mate, I should have been a dolphin lol Thanks for reading :-)