Hey d-pend! Good one. I like how you are experimenting with moving the notes/analysis to AFTER the actual poem, which allows the reader to give the piece a "virgin" AND THEN skip to the notes during or after the read. I also like how you used an actual artist's work (as you have in the past, and as I suggested in my comment last week). I like how your posts are progressing and becoming more digestible on all levels. Just my personal take, as usual...